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Post by travis on Jul 23, 2008 16:20:32 GMT -5
Name: Travis Jones
Nickname, if any: Travis
Age/Year: 14/4th year
Family: Mother, Sarah, and Father, Mark
Appearance: tall, has a six pack (sweetness) and has a great smile!
Wand: 12 1/2" Maple dragon heartstring
Personality: He is very funny and friendly, but sort of likes to make fun of others behind their backs. He is into quidditch and ricks at it!
Pet, if any: A snake named Paul
RP Sample:
"I can't wait to get to Hogwarts! Claire will be there!" Travis thought aloud to himself. Claire was his long time girlfriend. "Travis, could you come down here for a minute!" his mother called from the stairs. Travis sighed and walked down the steps to the liveing room.
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Post by Roxanne Weasley on Jul 24, 2008 1:14:43 GMT -5
You need full paragraphs on appearance and personality. You also need a complete RP sample with more than one paragraph.
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Post by Rogue Ivy Hawthorn on Dec 17, 2010 16:20:09 GMT -5
Name: Travis Jones
Nickname, if any: Travis
Age/Year: 14/4th year
Family: Mother: Sarah Jones Father: Mark Jones
Appearance: Travis is quite tall and works out daily so he has a six pack. Travis is well known for having a great, gleaming pure white smile!
Wand: 12 1/2'' Maple wood with the core of a dragon heartstring
Personality: Travis is Extremely funny and very friendly, but on occasions he will make fun of others behind their backs. He loves to play a bit quidditch and thinks he rocks at it!
Pet, if any: A snake called, Paul
RP Sample:
Travis couldn't wait to get to Hogwarts! Every second it got closer to go. He was excited because Claire will be there! Claire was his girlfriend, and had been for a while. so long that Travis considered it a his first proper relationship. Travis snapped out of his thought stream when his mother started calling him, 'Travis, could you come down here for a minute!' he mother yelled up the stairs probably not noticing how loud she was being. Travis sighed. he started slouching down the steps one at a time making a heavy thud on each step, muttering on the way. As he reached the bottom step he regained his posture, brushed the imaginary dust off his shirt and inhale and exhaled then entered the living room where his mother awaited him.
Travis walked into the room to see his mother in the centre of the room facing the opposite way of the doorway, she noticed him walk in and as she turned her face turned into a wide grin and she held out her arms. Travis thought she was going to hug him but was surprised when she held onto his biceps holding him out at arms length and looking at him up and down. She looked as if she was about to cry, ' Look at my boy all grown up. Fourth year in Hogwarts. I can't believe it's that time of year again when my baby leaves me. that Clare better look after you.' His mother pulled herself to him, knowing that she wouldn't be able to pull hi in like his first year, and softly kissed him on the cheek. ' I want to give you this.'
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